Why Is New Zealand A Green Country?
New Zealand is a green country and New Zealand can influece the world to become green counties too. New Zealand is a country that is proud of our scenery because it is a beautiful place and we want to keep it that way.
New Zealand has thought of many ways to keep us a green country. Some of these ways are-to recycle, re use and reduce, walk, take the bus or bike e.t.c to help us from pollution, to not use so much plastic and re-use it if you do, and to use less electricity by turning the lights off or having a shorter shower. They were only some of the ways that people, today make our country a green country.
The world is getting to point where people are taking things for granted and ruining their earth. Many things have happened to millions of people and is just going to get worse .Many things like-Water levels rising, Global warming and pollution. They are some of the main problems, today.
New Zealand is doing there bit to help the earth and will continue to help.
thats a good explanation rhiannon :)
ReplyDeleteGreat work Rhiannon. I am really impressed that you have worked through this writing and listened to what I said.
ReplyDeleteYou have good structure and paragraphing. Have you thought about the success criteria and is this being met?
It would be great if we could influence the world to be green like you mentioned. Imagine if the world wanted to be like NZ. Do you think England could ever be as green in their habits as us here in NZ?
Do you remember much about the environment in the UK? It would be interesting to compare NZ with the UK e.g. Is the smog in Auckland similar to that of Birmingham?
Great writing.
Try not to use New Zealand too much
ReplyDeleteVery nice explanation but spread out when you say New Zealand.
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